Purpose: To write with detail and description so that the reader gets a picture in their head of what you have writing about: -
Brown spikes with some white spider webs.
Brown spikes with some white spider webs.Feels prickly and sharp when I touch it with my hands.
It reminds me of a hair ball that the cat coughs up.
I wonder what grows inside ?
By Adam & his buddy.
White, holey, rough pumice that blasted from the volcano.
Feels rough and light to touch.Reminds me of running on the beach on a hot
summers day.
The surface is like a full moon on a dark night.
I wonder if it came out of a volcano ?
By Shae and Josh.
Brown and black lumpy spikes shooting out the middle like a baby hedgehog.
Smells funny and feels weird. Hard, prickly and rough.
I wonder if it will grow into a tree ?
It reminds me of a baby hedgehog putting out its spikes as it turns into a ball.
By Ben & his buddy.
I enjoyed reading your descriptions and really liked the odd objects that you used instead of familiar or known items. I think you have cleverly begun to describe things with adjectives and similes. Well done!
ReplyDeletei love what you have done today ,makes me look at our school in a new light ,it is very cool and funky ,i love the animals being so close as well
ReplyDeletetina c